The Gathering Storm: Review

The Gathering Storm: Review

November 1, 2009 |  by Renai LeMay

Don’t even bother reading this review of The Gathering Storm if you haven’t read the previous books in The Wheel of Time series. This is the twelfth book, and spoilers about the previous eleven will crop up in this review.

Blood and bloody ashes!

At long last, and two years after the tragic death of the original creator of the epic and much-loved series, fans have the next book in The Wheel of Time in their hot little hands, after it went on sale last week to great acclaim. No doubt there are tens of thousands of people right around the globe poring through the pages of the book this very instant. And the web forums are running hot.

Thankfully, those fans have much to be grateful for. Considering that Robert Jordan is no longer around, it is remarkable that The Gathering Storm is so true to the vision of the series’ original creator, and a worthwhile 12th book in the series that scores on a large number of levels. It’s simply thrilling to be thrust back into the world of The Wheel of Time.

God, I’ve missed it so much. I had a very emotional reaction to this book.

The question of whether Jordan substitute Brandon Sanderson is up to finishing the series has been answered. He is.

Thank you, Brandon Sanderson. Not only did we enjoy your stellar Mistborn series, along with the rest of Team Jordan, you have already gone some way towards realising the dreams of likely hundreds of thousands (millions?) of Wheel of Time fans who have been dying for this series to be finished in a way that will honour Robert Jordan, arguably the best fantasy author of our time. Keep up the good work.

That’s not to say that Sanderson has done as good a job as Jordan could have. There are many places in The Gathering Storm which make it clear that its delivery has suffered from Sanderson’s smaller vision. But the book is perhaps as good as it could possibly have been, without Jordan himself to write it.

For those of you who have lost patience with, as some call the series, The Waste of Time, this is now the time to jump back in and get up to speed on all things Rand Al’Thor and his merry band of Two Rivers folk. The end will come in the next few years, and The Gathering Storm is the first step in that journey. For anyone still wavering keep reading this review as I outline the book and provide some criticism.

If you are lost (and who can blame you) as to where the plot stands before The Gathering Storm, we recommend you read Dragonmount‘s plot summary (PDF).

As the book begins, the countries of the world of The Wheel of Time are in chaos.

Many are still reeling from the invasion of the Seanchan, the returned armies of Artur Hawkwing’s son from across the oceans. Others have suffered extensive upheaval due to the machinations of the Dark One’s top lieutenants, the fallen channellers known as the Forsaken.

The White Tower, the home of the female Aes Sedai, is suffering its own frosty civil war, with Tar Valon besieged by a rebel cadre of Aes Sedai, and even the Aiel have suffered their own discord, with bands of the Shaido clan still scattered across the land.

The situations of the heroes we have come to know and love so well over the past eleven books are no less chaotic.

Rand Al’Thor, the Dragon Reborn, appears to be spiralling downwards as he wraps himself ever closer in his steel cloak of mercilessness and – at times – indifference to the suffering of others. The Lord of the Morning, it appears, has been pushed too far and been forced to kill too many women. His heart has turned to blackest night.

Fellow Ta’averen Perrin and Mat are scattered around the world, leading disparate bands of armies that they plan to eventually meet with Rand’s forced to take on the forces of evil in the Last Battle. Elayne is consolidating her power as the new Queen of Andor, while Nynaeve is by Rand’s side, as are Min and Aviendha.

Perhaps the most interesting situation for one of the main protagonists in the story is that of Egwene Al’Vere. Raised Amyrlin by the rebel Aes Sedai who had congregated at Salidar but then marched on Tar Valon with an army led by one of the great generals of the time, Gareth Bryne.

After being captured by the White Tower Aes Sedai, Egwene is continuing within its own walls her resistance against the unstable rule of the Tower’s Amyrlin, Elaida. The only caveat is that she is doing so after being reduced to novice status again and while suffering repeated beatings and other indignities at the hands of Elaida’s underlings.

The Gathering Storm primarily follows the individual storylines of Rand and Egwene. As the book goes on, the difference between them becomes starker and starker. Rand’s problems mount, and he begins to fail to keep on top of them, or even to function normally when relating to those around him.

By contrast, Egwene takes on an almost Gandhi-like determination and stance towards her own suffering. She increasingly forces herself to rise against her pain and act for the unification of the warring Aes Sedai factions.

The choice to focus on these two central characters in the pages of The Gathering Storm was a wise one, whether it was made by Jordan or Sanderson. Finally, after several books worth of getting lost in twenty different character viewpoints, the series settles on some rather large questions and resolves them. And some of the climactic scenes involving the pair are highly dramatic – the kind of stuff the first few books in The Wheel of Time were filled with.

The Dragon Reborn taking the Stone of Tear kind of stuff, or claiming the Aiel.

The downside of this approach is that, as many other reviewers and fans have pointed out, we see relatively little of the popular Ta’averen Mat, or other major characters like Perrin. And we see nothing of Elayne at all.

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This problem is made worse by the fact that Sanderson pretty much fluffs the Mat chapters completely, missing the constant yet understated humour found when Jordan writes from Mat’s viewpoint and hamming it up big time. Yet again, Mat doesn’t get any limelight, and his escapades could have been entirely removed from the book – that’s how little importance they have in the wider scheme of things.

In terms of the writing in general, it is normally spot on and ‘feels’ like Jordan writing, especially in the minor tension-building scenes. Sanderson gets almost all of the characters down pat, especially Egwene, Rand, Siuan Sanche, Cadsuane, and Perrin.

However, there are several problem areas in the book that Sanderson fails with. The first is the Mat sections. But I was also disturbed by how downplayed several of the major, major plot resolutions are that fans have literally been waiting decades for.

Without going into the details, I was shocked at how quickly ongoing mysteries such as Verin Sedai’s secret were solved and then written out of the plot. These things should have been more major focuses of the book. They needed to have more drama and more build-up. People have been constructing theories about these mysteries for the past ten years online. One chapter to deliver the solution is just not enough, when Jordan himself had been feeding the debate for years and years. Especially when many nuggety chapters like this are surrounded by fluffy almost-filler.

In a similar vein, although the climactic battles and confrontations of the book are ultimately satisfying and give you a certain thrill, they are broadly too short and Sanderson didn’t go into enough detail when describing them. These things are BIG events. They should have been treated as such. They shouldn’t be over within several chapters. The repercussions should have been felt.

Ultimately, these are minor quibbles, of the level that you could level at any of the previous Jordan-penned books in The Wheel of Time. And there is no doubt that many (including myself) will consider The Gathering Storm a cut above the most recent few books in the series, where Jordan simply seemed to get bogged down with the size of the world he had created, struggling to bring it all together for the big conclusion.

The one question fans have been debating (OK, to be honest, they’re all still debating who killed bloody Asmodean) over the past few years is whether Brandon Sanderson would be up to the task of finishing Robert Jordan’s masterpiece in a way that is true to the author’s vision.

That answer is yes. If you are a Wheel of Time fan and have not already bought it (what, are you insane?!), run, do not walk, run out to your local bookstore and buy a copy of this book, read it, re-read the entire series, then watch and wait feverishly over the next few months for even a small tidbit of news about when the remaining two books in the series will come out and we finally enter Tarmon Gaidon.

The Last Battle is drawing near, The Wheel of Time is back on track for completion, and things are well in the world again. Let the Dragon ride again on the winds of time.

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10 Comments


  1. Enjoyed your review.

    I can’t help but feel that the emotional reaction readers are having is distinct to Brandon’s writing style. The final chapters, for example, seemed very MB like to me. Not that I didn’t enjoy them, just that substantively they are distinctly different and elicit an emotional response that to me was not characteristic of RJs narrative style.

    • I don’t know. I was kind of impressed at how this book *doesn’t* sound like Mistborn, as opposed to, say, Warbreaker.
      Having said that, I do agree that Mat needs a careful reconsideration on BS’s part. Fortunately, nothing major has happened with him, so there’s time to get him right for the main plot line.
      And about Verin’s chapter, I also thought that just sitting down for a conversation and neatly explaining everything is *not* the way to do it. We should get wind of what’s happening there from Verin’s own PoV, and maybe some tidbits from the notebook\letter she left Egween\Mat.
      All this to say – I think the review is dead-on (well, I thought the battle for TV was nicely handled, but that’s all).

      • Cheers!

        Yeah, we can but hope with Mat. I am really surprised that Sanderson didn’t focus on him more, given the demand, but I am conscious that he deliberately tried to write those chapters humorously.

        The TV battle was good, and I got a little ‘thrill’ from it … but well, I just didn’t feel it was detailed enough, or that we got a feeling of the scale of the amount of ppl involved. And I expected some more Blood Knives chaos at the end, given how they had been built up.

    • Really? I didn’t get that much of an emotional feeling from the Mistborn characters … in general I feel probably RJ is better at that sort of stuff. I think probably I had that reaction because Sanderson was so good at thrusting us back into the Wheel of Time world … a world which I, and many others, grew up with.

  2. Don’t forget that part of the criticism against the books that weren’t that stellar (COT, WH) were because Jordan tried to do what the fans wanted, which was to include Mat. Jordan struggled to get him in those plot lines in the books and ended up bogging down the series with disparate plot structure. I appreciate that Sanderson knew this and kept Mat mostly away from this book.

    • Fair point! That could indeed be what Sanderson was trying to do. But I still feel the Mat chapters … just not really that great. He’s a hard character to master, I guess.

  3. I think it’s kind of impossible to ask Sanderson to ‘give more time’ to resolving the various themes. The world of the WoT left by Jordan was so madly multi-threaded that some important themes are going to HAVE to be dealt with in a single chapter, like with Verin. At least The Gathering Storm actually resolves some issues, which it had increasingly looked like Jordan was unable to do. You may think some parts of The Gathering Storm were just ‘filler’, but I think the entirety of books 10 and 11 were just filler, along with much else besides. The Gathering Storm was a breath of fresh air compared to the waffle that preceded it. And I hope The Towers of Midnight finally clarifies why it was thought necessary that the whole Seanchan sub-plot even exist.

    That said, I love the series. I just think it could have been much much shorter, and that it would’ve been much more powerful for it. So please stop suggesting that Sanderson take his time on anything just because it has been a long time so far, lest the series run into twenty books (touch wood!).

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